I need the essay to summarize a presentation. I’m going to put the presentation in the “upload additional materials”. Talking about the challenges, the essay needs to be on one or two main ones and concentrate rather than spread. Teacher gave us some feedbacks : “Your approach is too broad, geographically and thematically.

Income inequality – figure 2. Where is figure 1? please indicate a source.

Technology – how is this relates to your previous discussion? Is this par of the IPAT?

conclusion – it is not clear that they follow on the discussion you have earlier. Make the connection clearer.”